~ Just for a While ~
Oh did you know..
Gazing upon the stars..Still makes me think of you..
Even if just for a while..
Oh did you know..
Listening to our song..Still makes me cry..
Even if just for a while..
Oh did you know..
Looking at you across the room..Still makes my heart clench..
Even if just for a while..
Oh did you know..
Thinking back on our time..Still makes me regret letting you go..
Even if just for a while..
Oh if only you knew..
How many times I still wake up calling your name..
The hollow silence mocking me..
Your face burned in my brain..
Come back..Come back..Screams my empty heart..
Broken into a million pieces..
Too long have we been apart..
I know I loved you then..I know I love you now..
Come back..'Coz I know you loved me too..
Even if just for a while..
Oh did you know..
Gazing upon the stars..Still makes me think of you..
Even if just for a while..
Oh did you know..
Listening to our song..Still makes me cry..
Even if just for a while..
Oh did you know..
Looking at you across the room..Still makes my heart clench..
Even if just for a while..
Oh did you know..
Thinking back on our time..Still makes me regret letting you go..
Even if just for a while..
Oh if only you knew..
How many times I still wake up calling your name..
The hollow silence mocking me..
Your face burned in my brain..
Come back..Come back..Screams my empty heart..
Broken into a million pieces..
Too long have we been apart..
I know I loved you then..I know I love you now..
Come back..'Coz I know you loved me too..
Even if just for a while..
leave a comment if ya liked it..n a lil constructive criticism will not be unwelcome either :)
jaa ne!!
2 comments:
"hmmmmmmm....."
that - was my comment...
and as to constructive criticism.. i agree that i am not an expert in poetry.. but well..one line bugged me a bit..
"Your face burned in my brain.."
y didnt u use heart or eyes... face burned in brain is deviating from the lovey dovey senti purpose of the poem..
wouldnt have gone with the whole rhythm i think.. :)
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